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::A change to make this more readable would be to replace the &lt;br/&gt; with blank lines. That would help a bit by creating breaks between the different paragraphs and keep the readers eyes from bugging out when trying to follow the proper flow. There is a template [[Template:Title|"title"]] that was created to help provide a more standard formatting for the title of a page. To use it just add <nowiki>{{title|name=Page Name|author=Your Name}}</nowiki> to the page. Usage information can be found on the [[Template:Title]] page. [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 22:10, 21 July 2007 (EDT)
::A change to make this more readable would be to replace the &lt;br/&gt; with blank lines. That would help a bit by creating breaks between the different paragraphs and keep the readers eyes from bugging out when trying to follow the proper flow. There is a template [[Template:Title|"title"]] that was created to help provide a more standard formatting for the title of a page. To use it just add <nowiki>{{title|name=Page Name|author=Your Name}}</nowiki> to the page. Usage information can be found on the [[Template:Title]] page. [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 22:10, 21 July 2007 (EDT)
== Alex Warlorn said ... ==
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Geez. Poor kid/guy/whatever he/she/it started out as.
Does he at least keep the love of his life each reality shift? Is reality altering or is his soul just being displaced?
--Alex Warlorn 04:04, 23 September 2007 (EDT)
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Interesting story. I was tempted to do some editing for the format, as it seems you are somewhat unfamiliar with the markup used by MediaWiki. (actually, about all I was tempted to change was the paragraph splits. To start a new paragraph you need to have two newlines, not one. See Help:Editing for some basic information on the markup. More advanced forms of the commonly used markup can be found at MetaWiki.) Anyway, keep up the good work! ShadowWolf 21:09, 20 July 2007 (EDT)

It's actually my first time using this kind of system, but I'm sure I'll learn quick. Thanks for stopping by. Pocsock 21:50, 21 July 2007 (EDT)
A change to make this more readable would be to replace the <br/> with blank lines. That would help a bit by creating breaks between the different paragraphs and keep the readers eyes from bugging out when trying to follow the proper flow. There is a template "title" that was created to help provide a more standard formatting for the title of a page. To use it just add {{title|name=Page Name|author=Your Name}} to the page. Usage information can be found on the Template:Title page. ShadowWolf 22:10, 21 July 2007 (EDT)

Alex Warlorn said ...

Geez. Poor kid/guy/whatever he/she/it started out as.

Does he at least keep the love of his life each reality shift? Is reality altering or is his soul just being displaced?

--Alex Warlorn 04:04, 23 September 2007 (EDT)