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m good work, keep it up :P
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yeah.
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Good start, Lloyd. I like the character and this is a rather decent story. -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 21:50, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
Good start, Lloyd. I like the character and this is a rather decent story. -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 21:50, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
{{Green|I agree with everything said above. This is looking to be a great introduction for Jonas.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader|Concerned Reader]] 23:15, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

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Nice opening, no prizes for guessing what's about to happen though ;) --Fibio 15:51, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Considering that I've written two stories where he's a fox... not really, no =D -- Lloyd Brunnel 16:25, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Good start, Lloyd. I like the character and this is a rather decent story. -- ShadowWolf 21:50, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree with everything said above. This is looking to be a great introduction for Jonas. --Concerned Reader 23:15, 25 August 2009 (UTC)