Talk:JT Fox's Sly and Tracy At the Bus Stop

I must confess a certain weakness for your Sly Fox stories, thank you for writing another one. Though if you'd like a bit of critique, Tracy seems to accept Sly sooner than can be reasonably believed. Even if Xanadu was widely known and accepted at this point, one would still be wary of someone as... peculiar as Sly. You may also wish to expand on the TF process itself as well as the overall description of events as this story seems to lack some of the quality shared by the other stories in this series. --Lloyd 11:05, 8 August 2009 (UTC)