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Nice little story! I hope my various suggestions and comments weren't out of line, I figured I'd give input both on minor issues of grammar or wording as well as a few bits of story logic I felt might use a little refining. If I went too far or otherwise made a mess of things feel free to revert my changes. [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 21:48, 27 July 2007 (EDT) | Nice little story! I hope my various suggestions and comments weren't out of line, I figured I'd give input both on minor issues of grammar or wording as well as a few bits of story logic I felt might use a little refining. If I went too far or otherwise made a mess of things feel free to revert my changes. [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 21:48, 27 July 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | :Not at all; I actually feel kind of stupid when I see all of the preposition mistakes I made, especially after spending a whole month studying them in the past year (we only have eighteen prepositions in Spanish, so I have never really got the hang of them in English). | ||
| + | :I’m going to rewrite the whole part of when they enter the town. You are right about the dried blood and the skepticism some of the students should have with the professor’s answer. | ||
| + | :As for the mayor’s house, I still believe it might be possible to find a building in that state because of many factors, but specially the materials used around that time. Solid rocks tend to last a long time, even at the edge of a wood or jungle and after four hundred years, take as an example the Mayan ruins and some of their still well preserved paintings. | ||
| + | :I’m also going to include some information and little changes. | ||
| + | :Thanks for stopping by. [[User:Pocsock|Pocsock]] 02:09, 28 July 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | ::No problem. This sort of editing is one of the things that a wiki is best at, so it's great to see someone taking advantage of it. :) As far as the state of the house is concerned, I wasn't very sure about it myself; I'm Canadian and so don't have much experience with buildings more than a hundred years old. I'll quite willingly bow to your judgment on that one. [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 03:09, 28 July 2007 (EDT) | ||
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| + | Great story. Is the Nahuals a actual creature? Or did you made it up? | ||
Latest revision as of 23:21, 31 January 2009
Nice little story! I hope my various suggestions and comments weren't out of line, I figured I'd give input both on minor issues of grammar or wording as well as a few bits of story logic I felt might use a little refining. If I went too far or otherwise made a mess of things feel free to revert my changes. Bryan 21:48, 27 July 2007 (EDT)
- Not at all; I actually feel kind of stupid when I see all of the preposition mistakes I made, especially after spending a whole month studying them in the past year (we only have eighteen prepositions in Spanish, so I have never really got the hang of them in English).
- I’m going to rewrite the whole part of when they enter the town. You are right about the dried blood and the skepticism some of the students should have with the professor’s answer.
- As for the mayor’s house, I still believe it might be possible to find a building in that state because of many factors, but specially the materials used around that time. Solid rocks tend to last a long time, even at the edge of a wood or jungle and after four hundred years, take as an example the Mayan ruins and some of their still well preserved paintings.
- I’m also going to include some information and little changes.
- Thanks for stopping by. Pocsock 02:09, 28 July 2007 (EDT)
- No problem. This sort of editing is one of the things that a wiki is best at, so it's great to see someone taking advantage of it. :) As far as the state of the house is concerned, I wasn't very sure about it myself; I'm Canadian and so don't have much experience with buildings more than a hundred years old. I'll quite willingly bow to your judgment on that one. Bryan 03:09, 28 July 2007 (EDT)
Great story. Is the Nahuals a actual creature? Or did you made it up?
