Talk:The Diary of the Dead Guy

This is an interesting story and very well written. Please continue the good work. --Lloyd

Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --Drake

Thanks guys. I'll probably be finishing this before next Sunday, cause I'm leaving then. Guvnor

I'm finished. I'll look for typos, then declare this done.--Guvnor Of Space 00:23, 22 June 2009 (UTC)