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Did you want this one marked Copyediting Requested? I recall you mentioning something like that last night. --Buck 19:02, 22 September 2007 (EDT)
Ending? HELP!
I thought I had an ending. I don't. My current thought is to have the fish TF him into a fish. He gets onto the shore, cons somebody else into TFing him. He hunts down the Oberon, gets thing clarified, gets his gift of TFness, and goes home. Of course, he HAS eaten and drank food in Faerie, and he HAS been there for months/years. So, when he gets back home he ages a couple hundred years and dies. :)
Other ideas desperately requested.
There's an obvious loose end you haven't touched: Why the heck does "the Oberon" think Stephen has any of Oberon's gold in the first place? What with magick and all that, you'd think Oberon could manage to not make that kind of mistake in the first place! Since this mistake seems to have granted Stephen the right to demand beaucoup compensation from Oberon, perhaps one of Oberon's enemies is behind it? Cubist 04:39, 23 September 2007 (EDT)