User talk:Kenani/The Girl of His Dreams: Difference between revisions

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My first story on Shifti. Enjoy.--Kenani 19:12, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

A little formulaic, but well-written. Nicely done. —Robotech Master 19:15, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Not bad. As RM said, a bit formulaic, but well executed. Pardon me while I go add you to the Pack. -- ShadowWolf 19:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, then. It may be formulaic, but keep in mind that it's my first story. Gotta start somewhere. --Kenani 19:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

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	:Not bad. As [[User:Robotech Master\|RM]] said, a bit formulaic, but well executed. Pardon me while I go add you to [[ShadowWolfs Pack\|the Pack]]. -- [[User:ShadowWolf\|ShadowWolf]] 19:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)		:Not bad. As [[User:Robotech Master\|RM]] said, a bit formulaic, but well executed. Pardon me while I go add you to [[ShadowWolfs Pack\|the Pack]]. -- [[User:ShadowWolf\|ShadowWolf]] 19:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

			:Thanks, then. It may be formulaic, but keep in mind that it's my first story. Gotta start somewhere. --[[User:Kenani\|Kenani]] 19:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)