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:A very large number of authors use this site, Mr. "David" — it's the recommendation of this Administrator that you should always run your comments through a spelling&grammar check before hitting the "post" button. Your comment contains both a spelling error and a grammatical mistake that most "Fifth Graders" could spot. In addition to that you either | :A very large number of authors use this site, Mr. "David" — it's the recommendation of this Administrator that you should always run your comments through a spelling&grammar check before hitting the "post" button. Your comment contains both a spelling error and a grammatical mistake that most "Fifth Graders" could spot. In addition to that you either forgot the fact, or never learned, that not all stories need or contain a plot and, in the case of this specific story, it falls into a type that is called "vignettes". A "Vignette" is usually a single scene that normally doesn't contain a plot. —[[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 00:34, 9 February 2008 (EST) | ||
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David said ...
- A very large number of authors use this site, Mr. "David" — it's the recommendation of this Administrator that you should always run your comments through a spelling&grammar check before hitting the "post" button. Your comment contains both a spelling error and a grammatical mistake that most "Fifth Graders" could spot. In addition to that you either forgot the fact, or never learned, that not all stories need or contain a plot and, in the case of this specific story, it falls into a type that is called "vignettes". A "Vignette" is usually a single scene that normally doesn't contain a plot. —ShadowWolf 00:34, 9 February 2008 (EST)
That is the most stubidess story I have ever read in my life. It has no plot man!
--David 00:09, 9 February 2008 (EST)