Talk:Bryan's picks

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Jetfire said ...

Ok put "Tom and Cat" through the editing it needed. May still be a bit rough, but it's in a format I'm happy with. (and not the first upload draft I originally put up. :) )

--Jetfire 18:43, 16 August 2007 (EDT)

Looks good, I'll take off the editing needed icon. I notice you doubled the gaps between paragraphs, was that intentional? Nothing wrong with it, just wondering. Bryan 21:19, 16 August 2007 (EDT)

Jetfire said ...

Semi intentional, tried single space and it doesn't seem to look right. Tried double space and it still doesn't seem right. Will probably change back to single space if I ever do them another pass.

--Jetfire 22:15, 25 September 2007 (EDT)

Joysweeper said ...

Oh, wow! Thanks Bryan! I finally got around to making the final edits - it's pretty much done now. I'm fussy enough that I might one day come back and add another detail or something, but it's functionally done. --Joysweeper, 14 January 2008 (EDT)

Heh. I'm the one who should be thanking you, for posting your stories in the first place. :) Bryan 22:10, 18 January 2008 (EST)

Zowie!

I'm quite honored to have so many of my stories included on your list, thank you!

As for my story "What You Eat", I think most folks miss that the trigger is the GENDERbread mix she bought in place of GINGERbread mix. I don't know if you missed it or if you were specifically avoiding giving it away in the blurb on the list. Either way, I may have to rework it to make it a little less subtle.