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Nice to see you post a story! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
Nice to see you post a story! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)
Powerful imagery and great flow - my only complaint is that I'm apparently too tired to follow it in a completely coherent manner. I did manage to make it all the way through and think this shows some promise! -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 01:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

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Nice to see you post a story! -- ShadowWolf 01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Powerful imagery and great flow - my only complaint is that I'm apparently too tired to follow it in a completely coherent manner. I did manage to make it all the way through and think this shows some promise! -- ShadowWolf 01:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)