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I'm finished. I'll look for typos, then declare this done.--[[User:Guvnor Of Space|Guvnor Of Space]] 00:23, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
I'm finished. I'll look for typos, then declare this done.--[[User:Guvnor Of Space|Guvnor Of Space]] 00:23, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
This is quite good. You are a far better writer than you give yourself credit for. That last bit about the rabies thing, is that a refrence to "World War Z"? --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel|Lloyd]]

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This is an interesting story and very well written. Please continue the good work. --Lloyd

Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --Drake

Thanks guys. I'll probably be finishing this before next Sunday, cause I'm leaving then. Guvnor

I'm finished. I'll look for typos, then declare this done.--Guvnor Of Space 00:23, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

This is quite good. You are a far better writer than you give yourself credit for. That last bit about the rabies thing, is that a refrence to "World War Z"? --Lloyd