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Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --[[User:WolfyDrake95|Drake]] | Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --[[User:WolfyDrake95|Drake]] | ||
Thanks guys. I'll probably be finishing this before next Sunday, cause I'm leaving then. | |||
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This is an interesting story and very well written. Please continue the good work. --Lloyd
Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --Drake
Thanks guys. I'll probably be finishing this before next Sunday, cause I'm leaving then. Guvnor