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Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to [[ShadowWolfs Pack]] at 2.5 stars. [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 00:57, 10 May 2008 (EDT) | Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to [[ShadowWolfs Pack]] at 2.5 stars. [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 00:57, 10 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
: What specific improvements do you think a good editor would make? If they're minor (punctuation, formatting, etc.), go ahead and edit the story page, and I'll revert any changes I disagree with. If major, post here. (This goes for all my stories.) --[[User:Trismegistus Shandy|Trismegistus Shandy]] 14:27, 30 June 2008 (EDT) | |||
::Actually the "editors touch" is about flow, word choice, etc... This story is excellent, but very rough - it actually reminds me of a lot of my rough drafts. Then I hand them to an editor :) -- [[User:ShadowWolf|ShadowWolf]] 15:23, 30 June 2008 (EDT) | |||
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Good story, good idea... Very Heinleinian. Could use a good editors touch, but is otherwise a good read. Adding this to ShadowWolfs Pack at 2.5 stars. ShadowWolf 00:57, 10 May 2008 (EDT)
- What specific improvements do you think a good editor would make? If they're minor (punctuation, formatting, etc.), go ahead and edit the story page, and I'll revert any changes I disagree with. If major, post here. (This goes for all my stories.) --Trismegistus Shandy 14:27, 30 June 2008 (EDT)
- Actually the "editors touch" is about flow, word choice, etc... This story is excellent, but very rough - it actually reminds me of a lot of my rough drafts. Then I hand them to an editor :) -- ShadowWolf 15:23, 30 June 2008 (EDT)