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: Not sure what happened -- it's fixed. Thanks! [[User:Michael Bard|Michael Bard]] 2:16, 4 March 2008 (EST) | : Not sure what happened -- it's fixed. Thanks! [[User:Michael Bard|Michael Bard]] 2:16, 4 March 2008 (EST) | ||
==Two more bits of editing== | |||
I found this down at the beginning of chapter 16: "<add note about using gravitic tech Eeysarmarnees found to scan, and find, irregularities on Salaneigh's Folly>" | |||
And this at chapter 20: "[mention Nerianne's air-rifle -- explain about "Glistening Hunters"]" | |||
Also, do a search for "Corporate Shipp". The double p is a typo, I presume. [[User:Bryan|Bryan]] 05:13, 6 March 2008 (EST) | |||
:All fixed, thanks! [[User:Michael Bard|Michael Bard]] 02:36, 7 March 2008 (EST) | |||
Latest revision as of 02:37, 7 March 2008
No wonder this story's so long
I've been working my way through this and I'm liking it so far (I'll give a more detailed review once I'm done :). But I just noticed a spot of trouble around chapter ten; there's a large chunk of text that's been duplicated across two chapters. Do a text search for the string "Eeysarmarnees jumped back into jumpspace" and you'll find the two sections with near-identical content. Bryan 21:20, 2 March 2008 (EST)
- Not sure what happened -- it's fixed. Thanks! Michael Bard 2:16, 4 March 2008 (EST)
Two more bits of editing
I found this down at the beginning of chapter 16: "<add note about using gravitic tech Eeysarmarnees found to scan, and find, irregularities on Salaneigh's Folly>"
And this at chapter 20: "[mention Nerianne's air-rifle -- explain about "Glistening Hunters"]"
Also, do a search for "Corporate Shipp". The double p is a typo, I presume. Bryan 05:13, 6 March 2008 (EST)
- All fixed, thanks! Michael Bard 02:36, 7 March 2008 (EST)