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Notes on the DC
- The cargo flier had crashed in the Towers, the deepest, hottest part of the so-called Billion Year Drought that left the majority of a supercontinent without a drop of water and turned an ocean the size of Earth’s Pacific to sand, dust, and hardpan.
- It is a little odd to call the Towers, which is a place, part of the Drought, which was an event. Really it's a part of the Dry Ocean which was caused by the Drought.
- Without the large equipment to simply disassemble hulks and haul away usable parts, Ryan had focused in getting damaged vehicles running again, however she could.
- 'On,' and 'he' (for a little while longer at least :-)
- “Leave us allow these meat-brained squares to cogitate that for a while,”
- I think there's a word missing in there.
--Antimatter (talk) 21:05, 29 February 2016 (CST)