User talk:Robotech Master/All Nighter

Defaultsort issue

No IWIR (yet), but the sorting on the category page has finally annoyed me enough to complain about it. Could somebody prepend a zero to all the single-digit "episode" numbers for the Integration series? The way it's set up right now, the category page lists 10-19, then 1, then 20-25, then 2-9. Changing the defaultsort of the first nine from "Part 1" to "Part 01" and so on should fix that. --Proginoskes (talk) 14:23, 16 May 2013 (CDT)

Comments on DC

I love the changes and new scenes here. They really do make the whole story feel more coherent and give the events here more context. (I know that's the point, but I thought I'd mention that I appreciate it.)

I only noticed one error:

“And if I were an Integrate, I’d be monitoring net searches for any suspicious activity relating to Integrate—

Should be Integrates or maybe integration.

And a few comments:

Myla got a plain vanilla cone while Rhianna Fused with Kaylee and got a Fuser-sized three-scoop bowl of Death by Chocolate.

It's interesting that fuzer-sized servings are a thing, since the human's organic body and stomach are still normal-sized. Do people who fuse a lot normally need to eat more to power the nanoprobes?

Uplift was a city of over fifteen million, counting the suburbs in their own smaller climate domes.

Since this is before RIDE citizenship, I assume the population figures only count humans? I'm curious how much they increase, both for the individual polities and for the planet as a whole after governments start to officially recognize RIDEs as people.

Still, Colonel Gray wouldn’t have any reason to be cloaked, not here. Fritz primed his armcannon capacitors. He wasn’t going to use full power, not here.

Having two sentences end with comma, not here so close together was a bit jarring.

--Antimatter (talk) 20:40, 24 February 2016 (CST)