User talk:Robotech Master/All Aboard

Typos & Comments

“She’s coming along to the meeting as an observer for the rest of the Integrate.

Integrates.

“But he looked lonely, and I wonder if Hugh ever gets another RIDE, given that one's already taken...Hugh took a liking to him.”

Okay, I read this sentence several times, and I just can't quite figure out what it is trying to say.

“Myla, login here. I’m appointing you and Sophie pro tem heads of security with full access to all files.”

Log in. (Two words when it's a verb.)

“Well, at least now we’ll be able to view everything while review those personnel files.

While we review or while reviewing would work.

--Antimatter (talk) 22:27, 26 February 2016 (CST)