Talk:Unpresentable Heroes
This was a good read. I like the concept behind it and while the twist at the end wasn't much of a surprise, it was worth it. All the defects that detract from this story could be polished out with the help of a good editor. Adding it to ShadowWolfs Pack at 3 stars. ShadowWolf 01:00, 10 May 2008 (EDT)