User talk:Michael Bard/Destinies

No wonder this story's so long

I've been working my way through this and I'm liking it so far (I'll give a more detailed review once I'm done :). But I just noticed a spot of trouble around chapter ten; there's a large chunk of text that's been duplicated across two chapters. Do a text search for the string "Eeysarmarnees jumped back into jumpspace" and you'll find the two sections with near-identical content. Bryan 21:20, 2 March 2008 (EST)

Not sure what happened -- it's fixed. Thanks! Michael Bard 2:16, 4 March 2008 (EST)

Two more bits of editing

I found this down at the beginning of chapter 16: "<add note about using gravitic tech Eeysarmarnees found to scan, and find, irregularities on Salaneigh's Folly>"

And this at chapter 20: "[mention Nerianne's air-rifle -- explain about "Glistening Hunters"]"

Also, do a search for "Corporate Shipp". The double p is a typo, I presume. Bryan 05:13, 6 March 2008 (EST)