Talk:Raptor's Hunt

Admins at work! Seriously, though, you show some talent. I've done the minimum needed to convert this to the specific markup used by the backend (MediaWiki — same code that runs Wikipedia) and redid the categories so it's properly sorted through to the various aggregator pages. While this isn't, quite, the quality needed to make ShadowWolfs Pack I'm sure that, if you refine your skill one of them will make it. Keep up the good work! — ShadowWolf 18:41, 13 August 2007 (EDT)

It does need some polish, but as ShadowWolf says you've got promise and polish can come with practice. If you would like for Shifti users to provide some direct editing feedback within the story itself, you could try putting "{{editing requested}}" at the top of the page and/or listing it at the editor's corner. I'd be happy to go through the story and mark it up with suggestions, which you would of course be free to accept or decline as you wish. Bryan 04:12, 14 August 2007 (EDT)

Thanks for the info I altered the formating on this story so that it is possible for it to be editted by other people, hence able to improve it. I hope that my next stories will be that much better. Oberon

I was going to try and provide some inline help, using the editing templates, but after doing a preview I've decided that it would be more instructive to do the edit offline, using the copy that was sent to TSA-Talk. — ShadowWolf 20:47, 19 August 2007 (EDT)