User talk:Hawl/The Sexiest Of All Tiger Girls

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Having just finished reading this story of yours, I gotta say it's not too bad, but it could use some cleaning up. I'd suggest at least fixing a formatting error somewhere in the middle, as well as taking another look at how the AIM chats are done, along with adding lines or something into the forum posts mentioned. --Chessrook44

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