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Hollins must be a recent immigrant to Uplift, or else thinking strictly about legal issues, to be thinking of RIDEs as ''tools''. In either case, this clearly takes place before certain key events of the ''Integration'' series (which, on second thought, makes perfect sense: you wrote it before the episodes in question). | Hollins must be a recent immigrant to Uplift, or else thinking strictly about legal issues, to be thinking of RIDEs as ''tools''. In either case, this clearly takes place before certain key events of the ''Integration'' series (which, on second thought, makes perfect sense: you wrote it before the episodes in question). | ||
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Feedback from Progos
I'm using the same comments-as-I-go format as I did for talk:Turnover.
Hollins must be a recent immigrant to Uplift, or else thinking strictly about legal issues, to be thinking of RIDEs as tools. In either case, this clearly takes place before certain key events of the Integration series (which, on second thought, makes perfect sense: you wrote it before the episodes in question).
"Dog", heh. That's a beautiful little gem.
Jackie Phillips is directly inspired by Minako Aino/Sailor Venus of Sailor Moon, isn't she? Or possibly she's deliberately cultivating that image, to encourage people to underestimate her or whatever other reason.
Ah, so regarding my first note, it's probably both: he probably was only thinking about laws, but he (now she) is also Earth-native.
"She never thinks we have enough backup". This exchange is also golden.
Oh, I was wrong! This does take place after (well, concurrently with) Citizen Katie. And a most satisfying end to an excellent tale.--Proginoskes (talk) 16:20, 5 April 2013 (UTC)