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'''I'm a bitch, I'm a tease, I'm a goddess on my knees...'''
''I'm a bitch, I'm a tease, I'm a goddess on my knees...''


The old Meridith Brooks tune cut off as Tom turned off his car. I asked, "I've always wanted to know what she meant by that... She's powerful being that's been knocked to her knees, or she gives excellent blowjobs?"
The old Meridith Brooks tune cut off as Tom turned off his car. I asked, "I've always wanted to know what she meant by that... She's powerful being that's been knocked to her knees, or she gives incredible blowjobs?"


"Why not both?" said Tom as we walked into the mall.  
"Why not both?" said Tom as we walked into the mall.  


Tom and I were college roommates. We were headed to see the latest __________________ flick. As we walked through the mall, I noticed how the girls looked at him. Never me. Always him. And no wonder. He was tall and fit, with blue eyes and black hair with a hint of a wave to it. He wore a white button down shirt and dark jeans. I, on the other hand, was slightly below average height, and something of an underweight geek. Tom was slender, I was skinny.
Tom and I were college roommates. We were headed to see the latest Transfomers flick. As we walked through the mall, I noticed how the girls looked at him. Never me. Always him. And no wonder. He was tall and fit, with blue eyes and black hair with a hint of a wave to it. He wore a white button down shirt and dark jeans. I, on the other hand, was slightly below average height, and something of an underweight geek. Tom was slender, I was skinny. It seemed like he had a new girl every other week, yet he always seemed to stay on good term with his exes. I had no idea how he did it.


As we got on the escalator up to the theater, Rob looked up and said quietly, "The cross of Venus."  
As we got on the escalator up to the theater, Rob looked up and said quietly, "The cross of Venus."  
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The theater was nowhere to be seen. Instead, we stood on a hilltop. It looked like something from a Maxfield Parrish painting. Fluffy white clouds in a bright blue sky. A row of marble pillars wreathed in ivy led to a chair, no, a throne, really. And on it was a woman the likes of which I have never seen. She was nothing like the San Antonio girls I'd grown up with. Dark skinned and raven haired, she somehow '''glowed''' with an inner light. She stood up, and walked towards us.  
The theater was nowhere to be seen. Instead, we stood on a hilltop. It looked like something from a Maxfield Parrish painting. Fluffy white clouds in a bright blue sky. A row of marble pillars wreathed in ivy led to a chair, no, a throne, really. And on it was a woman the likes of which I have never seen. She was nothing like the San Antonio girls I'd grown up with. Dark skinned and raven haired, she somehow '''glowed''' with an inner light. She stood up, and walked towards us.  


"Welcome!" she said, in a voice like dark honey.
"Welcome!" she said, in a voice like dark honey. She gave me a warm smile, then addressed herself to Tom.
 
"Have you figured out who I am?"
 
He looked around. "Well, you're obviously not the mall manager."
 
"This isn't a mall. It's a temple. Or at least the remains of one. A temple dedicated to me. "You caught my attention a few minutes ago."
 
Tom thought for a while, then dropped to one knee. "Venus?"
 
"One and the same! That was a pretty speech you gave to your friend here. Did you mean it?"
 
"It something I try to live by."
 
"Thank you for that. You may be one of the closest things I have to a worshiper in this age. I'm minded to grant you a boon.  What would you have of me?"
 
"If I could ask one thing of the Goddess of Love, it would be to better understand women."
 
She looked at Tom for a long moment, then said. "All knowledge comes with a price. Would you be willing to pay for what I would teach you?"
 
"Yes."
 
"The only way to truly understand women is to be one."
 
"Can you do that?"
 
"I am a Goddess." She paused, then "There will be some pain."
 
"As long as there is no lasting injury, I'm willing to endure it."
 
"Well, then. Let's do this." She gave Rob a smoldering look that heated my groin, and it wasn't even aimed at me. Rob, for all his experience with the girls at college, was helpless before her. She lifted him to his feet, then kissed him. At first gently, then more and more passionately.: She divested him of his clothes, and massaged his erect penis. After a few minutes, she knelt before him."
 
The lyric ran through my head, "a goddess on my knees." Venus looked at me and laughed. "One of the few songs of your era that I like." Then she kissed him on the tip of his cock. Soon, she was taking his considerable length to his hilt. She licked and sucked and nibbled at him. After a few minutes, it seemed like his erection was smaller and smaller. I couldn't fathom how he could be losing his hardon with the treatment he was getting. Finally, she was lapping more than sucking. He finally lost it with a moan and shiver. Venus stood. "How did that feel?"
 
Rob replied, "That was in''cred''ible. Was that..."
 
"Yes, yes it was."
 
She moved to the side, and I could see, nestled in his pubes above his balls, was a pink female hooded clit.
 
She leaned up against him, and murmured, "Now comes the painful part." She cupped his balls in her hand, then shoved upward. Rob bellowed, but she did not stop. Eventually satisfied, she stopped to survey her handiwork. His balls and ballsack were gone, replaced by a pink, plump pussy.
 
Rob was still half fetal with pain. Venus quickly went to work. She kissed his nipples, sucking and pulling on them. They stretched, then filled into a pair of perky tits. She poked and prodded, massaged and stroked, and with each touch, my roommate disappeared, replaced with a gorgeous woman. Venus finished before Rob recovered from the pain of having his balls shoved back up into his - now her - abdomen.
 
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Revision as of 21:02, 21 October 2011

I'm a bitch, I'm a tease, I'm a goddess on my knees...

The old Meridith Brooks tune cut off as Tom turned off his car. I asked, "I've always wanted to know what she meant by that... She's powerful being that's been knocked to her knees, or she gives incredible blowjobs?"

"Why not both?" said Tom as we walked into the mall.

Tom and I were college roommates. We were headed to see the latest Transfomers flick. As we walked through the mall, I noticed how the girls looked at him. Never me. Always him. And no wonder. He was tall and fit, with blue eyes and black hair with a hint of a wave to it. He wore a white button down shirt and dark jeans. I, on the other hand, was slightly below average height, and something of an underweight geek. Tom was slender, I was skinny. It seemed like he had a new girl every other week, yet he always seemed to stay on good term with his exes. I had no idea how he did it.

As we got on the escalator up to the theater, Rob looked up and said quietly, "The cross of Venus."

I looked up where he was looking. A girl was near the top of the escalator. The sun was glancing down through the skylight, side-lighting her. The curves of her legs and butt cast shadows in the shape of a cross.

"You sound almost reverent when you say that."

"I am. If you treated women as if they have a bit of the Goddess in them, perhaps you could get a girl."

"Me? no!"

"Yes, you. You could start with Sophie. She fancies you, you know."

We had reached the top of the escalator, and stopped dead.

The theater was nowhere to be seen. Instead, we stood on a hilltop. It looked like something from a Maxfield Parrish painting. Fluffy white clouds in a bright blue sky. A row of marble pillars wreathed in ivy led to a chair, no, a throne, really. And on it was a woman the likes of which I have never seen. She was nothing like the San Antonio girls I'd grown up with. Dark skinned and raven haired, she somehow glowed with an inner light. She stood up, and walked towards us.

"Welcome!" she said, in a voice like dark honey. She gave me a warm smile, then addressed herself to Tom.

"Have you figured out who I am?"

He looked around. "Well, you're obviously not the mall manager."

"This isn't a mall. It's a temple. Or at least the remains of one. A temple dedicated to me. "You caught my attention a few minutes ago."

Tom thought for a while, then dropped to one knee. "Venus?"

"One and the same! That was a pretty speech you gave to your friend here. Did you mean it?"

"It something I try to live by."

"Thank you for that. You may be one of the closest things I have to a worshiper in this age. I'm minded to grant you a boon. What would you have of me?"

"If I could ask one thing of the Goddess of Love, it would be to better understand women."

She looked at Tom for a long moment, then said. "All knowledge comes with a price. Would you be willing to pay for what I would teach you?"

"Yes."

"The only way to truly understand women is to be one."

"Can you do that?"

"I am a Goddess." She paused, then "There will be some pain."

"As long as there is no lasting injury, I'm willing to endure it."

"Well, then. Let's do this." She gave Rob a smoldering look that heated my groin, and it wasn't even aimed at me. Rob, for all his experience with the girls at college, was helpless before her. She lifted him to his feet, then kissed him. At first gently, then more and more passionately.: She divested him of his clothes, and massaged his erect penis. After a few minutes, she knelt before him."

The lyric ran through my head, "a goddess on my knees." Venus looked at me and laughed. "One of the few songs of your era that I like." Then she kissed him on the tip of his cock. Soon, she was taking his considerable length to his hilt. She licked and sucked and nibbled at him. After a few minutes, it seemed like his erection was smaller and smaller. I couldn't fathom how he could be losing his hardon with the treatment he was getting. Finally, she was lapping more than sucking. He finally lost it with a moan and shiver. Venus stood. "How did that feel?"

Rob replied, "That was incredible. Was that..."

"Yes, yes it was."

She moved to the side, and I could see, nestled in his pubes above his balls, was a pink female hooded clit.

She leaned up against him, and murmured, "Now comes the painful part." She cupped his balls in her hand, then shoved upward. Rob bellowed, but she did not stop. Eventually satisfied, she stopped to survey her handiwork. His balls and ballsack were gone, replaced by a pink, plump pussy.

Rob was still half fetal with pain. Venus quickly went to work. She kissed his nipples, sucking and pulling on them. They stretched, then filled into a pair of perky tits. She poked and prodded, massaged and stroked, and with each touch, my roommate disappeared, replaced with a gorgeous woman. Venus finished before Rob recovered from the pain of having his balls shoved back up into his - now her - abdomen.

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