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But overall, this story deals with the TG issue pretty close to how I imagine they'd unfold.--[[User:JonBuck|Buck]] 04:10, 23 February 2008 (EST) | But overall, this story deals with the TG issue pretty close to how I imagine they'd unfold.--[[User:JonBuck|Buck]] 04:10, 23 February 2008 (EST) | ||
I went ahead and made a very small change, inserted into the roommate change conversation where it seemed like it would come up. I decided to limit to scope by making it a touchy subject. | |||
--[[User:Eirik|Eirik]] 18:25, 23 February 2008 (EST) | |||
Revision as of 18:25, 23 February 2008
I did some proofing tonight, fixing most of the pronoun issues with Tim I could find. I altered a few words here and there for clarity (See the "Diff" link on Recent Changes). And there's one thing missing...
Tim never mentions having a period. :) All it really needs is a brief mention somewhere. "Look, I'm coping, okay? I visit a few different stores and buy pantyliners. I don't get PMS and the bleeding isn't any big deal..." sort of thing. Perhaps during that first conversation with Ela. Or perhaps Lisa asks about it.
But overall, this story deals with the TG issue pretty close to how I imagine they'd unfold.--Buck 04:10, 23 February 2008 (EST)
I went ahead and made a very small change, inserted into the roommate change conversation where it seemed like it would come up. I decided to limit to scope by making it a touchy subject.
--Eirik 18:25, 23 February 2008 (EST)