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Aanepada, also known as John, and his twin Adpeadag, sometimes known as John too, were hot.  Hot, covered in sweat and rich black goo, and sunk almost up to their thighs in the rich, black, Mesopotamian mud.  In the distance they could see a pair of men lifting skins of water and pouring their contents into the irrigation troughs.
Marduk's Gift


Ever since they'd grown up, they'd worked in the mud and the waterBut then, everybody did.  Or, almost everybody.  The king didn't.  And his servantsAnd those in the city--
Jonpeadag, sometimes known as John, was hotHot, covered in sweat and rich black goo, and sunk almost up to his thighs in the rich, black, Mesopotamian mudIn the distance he could see a pair of men lifting skins of water and pouring their contents into the irrigation troughs.


But somebody had to grow the grain, had to harvest the bounty of the Tigris to feed the needs of their King.
Ever since he'd grown up, he'd worked in the mud and the water.  But then, everybody did.  Or, almost everybody.  The king didn't.  And his servants.  And those in the city--  But somebody had to grow the grain, had to harvest the bounty of the Tigris.


The pair didn't even look up as the clatter of ass hooves clomped down the muddy dirt road, sending clumps of mud and dirty water into the fields at either side.  They didn't look up as the sound grew louder, and didn't even look up when unspoked wheels clattered by, splashing them with mud and gravel.
He didn't even look up as the earth grumbled.  It hadn't before, but then the acts of the Gods were everywhere.  He didn't look up at the clatter of ass hooves clomping down the muddy dirt road, sending clumps of mud and dirty water into the fields at either side.  He didn't look up as the sound grew louder, and didn't even look up when unspoked wheels clattered by, splashing him with mud and gravel.


Even when there was a scream, curses, the gurgling call of a dying donkey, they just kept working.
Even when there was a scream, curses, the gurgling call of dying donkeys, he just kept working.


It was only when they heard the schmack of a copper-bladed sword into heavy flesh that they stopped weeding and locked up, moving as oneMouths hanging open as dirty water dribbled down their backs, they watched as Enmebaragisi, their king, put the second ass pulling his saddlecart out of its misery.
It was only when he heard the schmack of a copper-bladed sword into heavy flesh that he stopped weeding and turned to see what was going onMouth hanging open as dirty water dribbled down his back, he stared.  The gaily painted saddlecart was stopped, one wheel still in the water and mud filled crack that had appeared in the roadway, its yoke cracked, mud and dirt splattered against its solid wooden wheels and the cloth-covered saddlehorse which his king had been straddled upon.  The dull tan asses, both lying on the ground, legs snapped.  One was dead, its head nearly severed from its neck, blood staing the mood.  The other screamed, as his king, Enmebaragisi, swung his sword through the second ass's neck.


Some how both had tripped over a hole in the road, both had broken their legs, snapped the chariot yoke, and were now lying there.  Dead.  Their blood staining the ground.
Both asses had tripped over the crack in the road, both had broken their legs, snapped the chariot yoke, and were now lying their.  Dead.  Their blood staining the ground.


So much for getting any meat--
So much for getting any meat--


The King let the bloody copper of his sword sink to the ground, his body coated in dust and sweat, his only clothing a formerly white linen skirt.
The King let the bloody copper blade of his sword sink to the ground, his body coated in dust and sweat and dirt, his only clothing a formerly white linen skirt.


Then he saw the two brothers, even as they saw him, and hurriedly tried to get back to work.
Then he saw Jonpeadag, even as Jonpeadag saw his king and averted his eyes, pretending he'd been working the whole time.


"You!" he boomed.  "Why is this-- this-- ''hole'' not fixed?"  He waved his sword at the jagged crack in the roadway, a crack half filled with muddy water, that had killed his asses.
The king wasn't fooled.  "You!" he boomed.  "Why is this-- this-- ''hole'' not fixed?"  He waved his sword at the jagged crack in the roadway that had killed his asses.


Aanepada was the first to speak as their king glared down at them in the mud.  "But-- sire-- we have to work in the fields--"
Jonpeadag answered as his king glared down at him in the mud.  "But-- sire-- I have to work in the fields--"


"I don't care!" the king roared.  "My asses are dead, and I have to deal with an interloper!"
"I don't care!" the king roared.  "My asses are dead, and I have to deal with an interloper!"


"Sire--" Anepadag began.
"Sire--".


"You-- both of you-- out, now."
"You-- out, now."


They both scrambled out of the mud, a little splashing the dusty legs of their King as they prostrated themselves on the road in front of him.  Mud caked their bodies, and oozed between their toes as the dirt pressed against them, and the sun pounded on their muddy backsTheir backs were not scared, for they were not slaves, but freemen. However, that seemed likely to change.
Jonpeadag scrambled out of the mud, a little splashing the dusty legs of his King as he prostrated himself on the road in front of him.  Thick goo caked his body, and oozed between his toes as the sun pounded on his muddy backA back that wasn't scared, for he was not a slave, but a freeman.
 
That seemed likely to change.


The King's face was red, red as the setting sun, and he was going to take out his frustrations on ''somebody''.  Raising his sword--
The King's face was red, red as the setting sun, and he was going to take out his frustrations on ''somebody''.  Raising his sword--
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''Hold.''
''Hold.''


The King stopped, the glistening copper sword falling from his hand and splunking into the dirt and mud.  Like the twins, he prostrated himself and faced the fields.  He ''knew'' the voice, even though he'd never heard it before.  Knew it as well as the twins, even though ''he'' had never spoken to them before either.
The King stopped, the glistening copper sword falling from his hand and splunking into the dirt and mud.  Like Jonpeadag, he prostrated himself and faced the fields.  He ''knew'' the voice, even though he'd never heard it before.  Knew it as well as Jonpeadag, even though ''he'' had never spoken to the freeman either.


''Might King Enmebaragisi, the fault belongs not to these, nor to yourself.  You fell to a trap created by my brother.  But, as my brother has intervened, so am I allowed to intervene.''
''Mighty King Enmebaragisi, the fault belongs not to him, nor to yourself.  You fell to a trap created by my brother.  But, as my brother has intervened, so am I allowed to intervene.''


None of the mortals dared to look upon the form of Marduk, the God of the earth, of the grain, and of the water saturated mud that fed them all.  None of them saw that he was a graceful, beautiful human, clean and shining, unlike the moral dirt covered bodies.
None of the mortals dared to look upon the form of Marduk, the God of the earth, of the grain, and of the water saturated mud that fed them all.  None of them saw that he was a graceful, beautiful human, clean and shining, unlike the dirt covered mortals.


King Enmebaragisi finally spoke, as only he dared to speak in the presence of divinity.  "Lord, but what can be done?  Even now the interloper approaches to slay me and take away all that is mine--"  He swallowed, and then hastily added, "and yours."
King Enmebaragisi spoke, as only he dared to speak in the presence of divinity.  "Lord, but what can be done?  Even now the interloper approaches to slay me and take away all that is mine--"  He swallowed, and then added, "and yours."


''Fear not, for I have been watching.  Though I may not create, I may change.  And that which I need is here.''
''Fear not, for I have been watching.  Though I may not create, I may change.  And that which I need is here.''


The two brothers hardly dared speak, terrified to move the slightest bit, barely breathing as the mud oozed from their bodiesThey heard a sigh of wind, a shush of gentle rain, and then each felt a ''touch'' upon their backs.  It wasn't a human touch, it wasn't the touch of an animal, or a stone, or a breath of wind.  It was a touch that they'd never forget.
Jonpeadag hardly dared speak, terrified to move the slightest bit, barely breathing as the mud oozed from his bodyHe heard a sigh of wind, a shush of gentle rain, and then felt a ''touch'' upon his back.  It wasn't a human touch, it wasn't the touch of an animal, or of a stone, or of a breath of wind.  It was a touch that he'd never forget.


''King, for you, for your destiny, let me change these.  Let me infuse them with the spirits of your slain beasts, with the soul and speed of the wild horse.  Let me prepare them to serve you in your hour of need.''
''King, for you, for your destiny, let me change him.  Let me infuse him with the spirits of your slain beasts, with the soul and speed of the wild horse.  Let me prepare him to serve you in your hour of need.''


Outside their volition, the two brothers pushed themselves up onto their hands and knees as hot energies pulsed through themThey felt their bodies change, grow--
Withough wishing it, Jonpeadag pushed himself onto his hands and knees as hot energies pulsed through himHe felt his body change, grow--


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


Their arms grew longer, and they stood on the toes of their feet as their arms lengthened to match.
His arms grew longer, and he stood on the toes of his feet as his arms lengthened to match.


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


Their middle fingers grew hard and tough, their other fingers shrunk, the same thing happening to their corresponding toes.
His middle fingers grew hard and tough, his other fingers shrunk, the same thing happening to his corresponding toes.


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


Their necks grew, their ears slid to the top of their heads, growing long and pointed, until they could look up upon the divinity that stood above themEach turned their head away, not daring to look.  Instead they looked at each other.
His ears slid to the top of his head, growing long and pointed, his neck lengthened until he could look upon the divinity that stood above himHe turned his head away, not daring to look, looking instead at his king.


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


Their bodies rippled as muscle grew, and bones changed.  Their chests grew rounder, their necks larger, as their hands and arms changed into forelegs, and their legs and feet changed into hindlegs.
His body rippled as muscle grew, and bones changed.  His chest grew rounder, his neck larger, as his hands and arms changed into forelegs, and his legs and feet changed into hindlegs.


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


The chins stretched outward, bursting from their face as they head's changed into the muzzle of an ass.  Tails budded at the base of their spine, and burst out behind them.
His chin stretched outward, bursting from his face as his head stretched into the muzzle of an ass.  A tail budded at the base of his spine, and burst out behind him.


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


Hair burst across their naked flesh, the caked mud and dirt crackling and falling beside their hooves as their vision blurred and changed, and they became the donkey the God had made of them.
Hair burst across his naked flesh, the caked mud and dirt crackling and falling beside his hooves as his vision blurred and changed, and he became the mule the God had made of him.


''pulse''
''*pulse*''


The last energies flowed through them, their nostrils widened, and grew in sensitivity.  The hair flowed down their necks in a mane as a black line of hair continued down their spine and to their tails.  New scents flooded into them: the richness of the mud, the unwashed stench of the king, the last whisps of musk of the asses as their bodies faded, feeding the change, the fresh carved wood of the saddlecart, and the cracked yoke as it healed, the salty tang of the blood-coated copper blade, dropped onto the roadway, the cold greasy oil of the polished reins, the soft warm sweetness of the dyed and patterned wool blanket on the saddlecart.
The last energies flowed through him, his nostrils widened, and grew in sensitivity.  The hair flowed down his neck in a mane and the black line of hair continued down his spine and to his tail.  New scents flooded into his: the richness of the mud, the unwashed stench of the king, the last wisps of musk of the asses as their bodies faded, feeding the change, the fresh carved wood of the saddlecart, and the cracked yoke as it healed and changed from a design for two to a design for one, the salty tang of the blood-coated copper blade dropped onto the roadway, the cold greasy oil of the polished reins, the soft warm sweetness of the dyed and patterned wool blanket on the saddlecart.


''Go, my son.  Go and be victorious!''
''Go, my son.  Go and be victorious!''


And, with that, Marduk was gone.  And the three mortals knew it.
And, with that, Marduk was gone.  And the two mortals knew it.
 
King Enmebaragisi looked at the twin donkeys, once twin humans each often known as John.  The two beasts looked up at him, and at the other free men labouring in the fields.


The King leaned down and picked up the bridles laying on the ground. He shook off the the dirt and walked over and offered it to first one brother, and then the other.  Not knowing what they were doing, the twins each took the copper into their mouths.  The metal was cold and bitter, yet worn and loved.  Leather reins stretched back from each and the King grabbed them near their muzzles and pulled the donkeys around.  The pull at the reins yanked the rough-formed metal against their sensitive lips.
King Enmebaragisi looked at the massive mule, far bigger than any horse he'd ever seen, a mighty beast once a human often known as John.  The beast looked up at his king, and at the other free men labouring in the fields.


Even before he knew he'd spoken, Aanepada burst out"Hey! Careful! That hurts--"
The king leaned down and picked up the bridle laying on the ground. He shook off the the dirt and walked over and offered it to Jonpeadag.  Not knowing what he was doing, the mule took the copper into his mouthThe metal was cold and bitter, yet worn and loved. Leather reins stretched back and the King grabbed them near the former human's muzzle and pulled the mule around. The pull at the reins yanked the rough-formed metal against his sensitive lips.


All three stopped and stared.  King Enmebaragisi at he miracle, and the two brothers as how freely one had spoken to their king.
Even before he knew he'd spoken, Jonpeadag burst out. "Hey!  Careful!  That hurts--"


And both realized that they somehow ''knew'' they were equals now.
Each stared at the other.  King Enmebaragisi at the miracle, and Jonpeadag at the king to which he had so freely spoken.


Anepadag was the first to realize the implications.  "King," he said.  "We've changed, but then you know that."
And he realized, he ''knew'', that they were equals now.


The king couldn't help but smile as the tensions, the fear at the presence of Marduk, fell from him.
"King," he said.  "I've changed, but then you know that."


"You are our king, and we respect you.  But, we have been touched by the divine.  We will serve you.  But we are your companions, not your servants."
The king couldn't help but smile as the tension, the fear at the presence of Marduk, fell from him.


Aanepada nodded, and chewed on his bridle thoughtfully.
"You're my king, and I respect you.  But, I've been touched by the divine.  I'll serve you.  But I'm companion, not your servant."  He chewed on his bridle thoughtfully.


The king scratched his forehead, his long black hair bouncing in the braids behind him, and then nodded.  "Who am I to argue with the the gift of a God?"  He looked at the whisk on the ground near the saddlecart and kicked it into the field.  "So be it."
The king scratched his forehead, his long black hair bouncing in the braids that fell down his back, and nodded.  "Who am I to argue with the the gift of a God?"  He looked at the whisk on the ground near the saddlecart and kicked it into the muddy field.  "So be it."


With that, King Enmebaragisi carefully settled the chariot yoke on the donkey's backs, and strapped them around their chests, asking to make sure the straps weren't too tight.  As he clambered back onto the saddle, seating his royal posterior on the decorated blanket, Aanepada asked: "Sire, whom are we going to fight?"
With that, King Enmebaragisi settled the chariot yoke on the mule's back, and strapped it around his chest, asking to make sure the straps weren't too tight.  As he clambered back onto the saddle, seating his royal posterior on the decorated blanket, Jonpeadag asked: "Sire, whom are we going to fight?"


"Just some young interloper.  No kingdom."
"Just some young interloper.  No kingdom."


He flicked the reins, and the two donkeys started walking at a brisk trot, pulling the saddlecart behind themThey knew how to walk, and knew that they would be able to gallop when asked.
He flicked the reins, and the mule started walking at a brisk trot, easily pulling the weight of the saddlecart and his kingHe knew how to walk, and knew that he'd be able to gallop when asked.


The King continued.  "I've heard that his name is Gilgamesh--"
The king continued.  "I've heard his name is Gilgamesh--"

Revision as of 03:01, 10 December 2007

Marduk's Gift

Jonpeadag, sometimes known as John, was hot. Hot, covered in sweat and rich black goo, and sunk almost up to his thighs in the rich, black, Mesopotamian mud. In the distance he could see a pair of men lifting skins of water and pouring their contents into the irrigation troughs.

Ever since he'd grown up, he'd worked in the mud and the water. But then, everybody did. Or, almost everybody. The king didn't. And his servants. And those in the city-- But somebody had to grow the grain, had to harvest the bounty of the Tigris.

He didn't even look up as the earth grumbled. It hadn't before, but then the acts of the Gods were everywhere. He didn't look up at the clatter of ass hooves clomping down the muddy dirt road, sending clumps of mud and dirty water into the fields at either side. He didn't look up as the sound grew louder, and didn't even look up when unspoked wheels clattered by, splashing him with mud and gravel.

Even when there was a scream, curses, the gurgling call of dying donkeys, he just kept working.

It was only when he heard the schmack of a copper-bladed sword into heavy flesh that he stopped weeding and turned to see what was going on. Mouth hanging open as dirty water dribbled down his back, he stared. The gaily painted saddlecart was stopped, one wheel still in the water and mud filled crack that had appeared in the roadway, its yoke cracked, mud and dirt splattered against its solid wooden wheels and the cloth-covered saddlehorse which his king had been straddled upon. The dull tan asses, both lying on the ground, legs snapped. One was dead, its head nearly severed from its neck, blood staing the mood. The other screamed, as his king, Enmebaragisi, swung his sword through the second ass's neck.

Both asses had tripped over the crack in the road, both had broken their legs, snapped the chariot yoke, and were now lying their. Dead. Their blood staining the ground.

So much for getting any meat--

The King let the bloody copper blade of his sword sink to the ground, his body coated in dust and sweat and dirt, his only clothing a formerly white linen skirt.

Then he saw Jonpeadag, even as Jonpeadag saw his king and averted his eyes, pretending he'd been working the whole time.

The king wasn't fooled. "You!" he boomed. "Why is this-- this-- hole not fixed?" He waved his sword at the jagged crack in the roadway that had killed his asses.

Jonpeadag answered as his king glared down at him in the mud. "But-- sire-- I have to work in the fields--"

"I don't care!" the king roared. "My asses are dead, and I have to deal with an interloper!"

"Sire--".

"You-- out, now."

Jonpeadag scrambled out of the mud, a little splashing the dusty legs of his King as he prostrated himself on the road in front of him. Thick goo caked his body, and oozed between his toes as the sun pounded on his muddy back. A back that wasn't scared, for he was not a slave, but a freeman.

That seemed likely to change.

The King's face was red, red as the setting sun, and he was going to take out his frustrations on somebody. Raising his sword--

Hold.

The King stopped, the glistening copper sword falling from his hand and splunking into the dirt and mud. Like Jonpeadag, he prostrated himself and faced the fields. He knew the voice, even though he'd never heard it before. Knew it as well as Jonpeadag, even though he had never spoken to the freeman either.

Mighty King Enmebaragisi, the fault belongs not to him, nor to yourself. You fell to a trap created by my brother. But, as my brother has intervened, so am I allowed to intervene.

None of the mortals dared to look upon the form of Marduk, the God of the earth, of the grain, and of the water saturated mud that fed them all. None of them saw that he was a graceful, beautiful human, clean and shining, unlike the dirt covered mortals.

King Enmebaragisi spoke, as only he dared to speak in the presence of divinity. "Lord, but what can be done? Even now the interloper approaches to slay me and take away all that is mine--" He swallowed, and then added, "and yours."

Fear not, for I have been watching. Though I may not create, I may change. And that which I need is here.

Jonpeadag hardly dared speak, terrified to move the slightest bit, barely breathing as the mud oozed from his body. He heard a sigh of wind, a shush of gentle rain, and then felt a touch upon his back. It wasn't a human touch, it wasn't the touch of an animal, or of a stone, or of a breath of wind. It was a touch that he'd never forget.

King, for you, for your destiny, let me change him. Let me infuse him with the spirits of your slain beasts, with the soul and speed of the wild horse. Let me prepare him to serve you in your hour of need.

Withough wishing it, Jonpeadag pushed himself onto his hands and knees as hot energies pulsed through him. He felt his body change, grow--

*pulse*

His arms grew longer, and he stood on the toes of his feet as his arms lengthened to match.

*pulse*

His middle fingers grew hard and tough, his other fingers shrunk, the same thing happening to his corresponding toes.

*pulse*

His ears slid to the top of his head, growing long and pointed, his neck lengthened until he could look upon the divinity that stood above him. He turned his head away, not daring to look, looking instead at his king.

*pulse*

His body rippled as muscle grew, and bones changed. His chest grew rounder, his neck larger, as his hands and arms changed into forelegs, and his legs and feet changed into hindlegs.

*pulse*

His chin stretched outward, bursting from his face as his head stretched into the muzzle of an ass. A tail budded at the base of his spine, and burst out behind him.

*pulse*

Hair burst across his naked flesh, the caked mud and dirt crackling and falling beside his hooves as his vision blurred and changed, and he became the mule the God had made of him.

*pulse*

The last energies flowed through him, his nostrils widened, and grew in sensitivity. The hair flowed down his neck in a mane and the black line of hair continued down his spine and to his tail. New scents flooded into his: the richness of the mud, the unwashed stench of the king, the last wisps of musk of the asses as their bodies faded, feeding the change, the fresh carved wood of the saddlecart, and the cracked yoke as it healed and changed from a design for two to a design for one, the salty tang of the blood-coated copper blade dropped onto the roadway, the cold greasy oil of the polished reins, the soft warm sweetness of the dyed and patterned wool blanket on the saddlecart.

Go, my son. Go and be victorious!

And, with that, Marduk was gone. And the two mortals knew it.

King Enmebaragisi looked at the massive mule, far bigger than any horse he'd ever seen, a mighty beast once a human often known as John. The beast looked up at his king, and at the other free men labouring in the fields.

The king leaned down and picked up the bridle laying on the ground. He shook off the the dirt and walked over and offered it to Jonpeadag. Not knowing what he was doing, the mule took the copper into his mouth. The metal was cold and bitter, yet worn and loved. Leather reins stretched back and the King grabbed them near the former human's muzzle and pulled the mule around. The pull at the reins yanked the rough-formed metal against his sensitive lips.

Even before he knew he'd spoken, Jonpeadag burst out. "Hey! Careful! That hurts--"

Each stared at the other. King Enmebaragisi at the miracle, and Jonpeadag at the king to which he had so freely spoken.

And he realized, he knew, that they were equals now.

"King," he said. "I've changed, but then you know that."

The king couldn't help but smile as the tension, the fear at the presence of Marduk, fell from him.

"You're my king, and I respect you. But, I've been touched by the divine. I'll serve you. But I'm companion, not your servant." He chewed on his bridle thoughtfully.

The king scratched his forehead, his long black hair bouncing in the braids that fell down his back, and nodded. "Who am I to argue with the the gift of a God?" He looked at the whisk on the ground near the saddlecart and kicked it into the muddy field. "So be it."

With that, King Enmebaragisi settled the chariot yoke on the mule's back, and strapped it around his chest, asking to make sure the straps weren't too tight. As he clambered back onto the saddle, seating his royal posterior on the decorated blanket, Jonpeadag asked: "Sire, whom are we going to fight?"

"Just some young interloper. No kingdom."

He flicked the reins, and the mule started walking at a brisk trot, easily pulling the weight of the saddlecart and his king. He knew how to walk, and knew that he'd be able to gallop when asked.

The king continued. "I've heard his name is Gilgamesh--"