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Why does he need to? Or rather, why did you get him a complete mental change at the start then? Also, the way the Men In Black nuralizer works in this context is that it KILLS the new personality, totally, and erases all the knowledge and skills they had. (Yes, I do dislike the MiB) | |||
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Please don't use "smart quotes" (curly quotes) in page names. It's okay to use them in the {{title}} template but creates problems in linking the pages in from other parts of the site. — ShadowWolf 15:52, 14 August 2007 (EDT)
Paragraph Spacing
You might want to go back to the stories you recently posted and make sure the paragraphs are indicated with a blank line between them in your word processor. Your recent postings are basically single paragraphs... --Buck 16:48, 3 October 2007 (EDT)
In regards to your Xanadu story. There is no way in flipping heck that a Man In Black could EVER get the flawless drop on a Jedi!!
How then can I have my character get his memory back?!
Why does he need to? Or rather, why did you get him a complete mental change at the start then? Also, the way the Men In Black nuralizer works in this context is that it KILLS the new personality, totally, and erases all the knowledge and skills they had. (Yes, I do dislike the MiB)
Su'cuy, Oberon, it's Joysweeper. You're done - and if copyediting is welcome... well, don't take this wrong. I am very blunt when I proofread. I've beta read for three people in the past, and I'm not too good at subtlety. Consider yourself warned.
Oh. Wow. Well, the suggestions I have for your story are absurdly long. Four pages in Word and I'm not quite done. I'll put it on the story's discussion page when I've finished, okay? Joysweeper 19 October 2007 (EDT)