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m Changed my author name from my real name to a pen name I've been considering for use here on Shifti for a little while now… |
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== Prologue == | {{remove|== Prologue == | ||
=== Part One: Tragedy === | === Part One: Tragedy === | ||
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"It's all right, love," soothed Gordon. "You told me that assassin popped up out of nowhere, so there probably wasn't anything else you could have done for him." <br /> | "It's all right, love," soothed Gordon. "You told me that assassin popped up out of nowhere, so there probably wasn't anything else you could have done for him." <br /> | ||
"But I should have ''seen'' that infidel ''coming!''" Jenna sobbed. <br /> | "But I should have ''seen'' that infidel ''coming!''" Jenna sobbed. <br /> | ||
"It was already getting dark," her father comforted. "Now there's nothing left to do but hope that this isn't the end. " | "It was already getting dark," her father comforted. "Now there's nothing left to do but hope that this isn't the end. "}} | ||
=== Part Two: Serendipity === | === {{replace|Part Two: Serendipity|Part One: Discovery}} === | ||
{{replace|…|An account of the unexpected rediscovery of Cameron Spryfletch's medical records during the summer or fall of 2506. }}{{Side note|I have a few different reasons for why I want Cameron to have been reawakened by the time mentioned in the main text. First of all, I want him to have been awake for long enough to have already gotten used to living on the Earth of the future before he leaves for Zharus. Second, I intend for young Mr. Spryfletch to be at the 'furry' convention that the story [[Robotech Master/The Final Countdown|'The Final Countdown']] mentions as an event that will have been held on November 12<sup>th</sup>, 2506, in Springfield, Missouri, so that he can bear witness to the flight taken from there by Lubyanka the Sturmhaven she-wolf RIDE and her companions. Third, I was thinking of having Cameron established as an employee of the Springfield—Greene County Library by the time that Lubyanka goes there to get the specifications for IPv8 from one of his co-workers. }} | {{replace|…|An account of the unexpected rediscovery of Cameron Spryfletch's medical records during the summer or fall of 2506. }}{{Side note|I have a few different reasons for why I want Cameron to have been reawakened by the time mentioned in the main text. First of all, I want him to have been awake for long enough to have already gotten used to living on the Earth of the future before he leaves for Zharus. Second, I intend for young Mr. Spryfletch to be at the 'furry' convention that the story [[Robotech Master/The Final Countdown|'The Final Countdown']] mentions as an event that will have been held on November 12<sup>th</sup>, 2506, in Springfield, Missouri, so that he can bear witness to the flight taken from there by Lubyanka the Sturmhaven she-wolf RIDE and her companions. Third, I was thinking of having Cameron established as an employee of the Springfield—Greene County Library by the time that Lubyanka goes there to get the specifications for IPv8 from one of his co-workers. }} | ||
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