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This is an interesting story and very well written. Please continue the good work. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel|Lloyd]]
This is an interesting story and very well written. Please continue the good work. --[[User:Lloyd Brunnel|Lloyd]]
Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --[[User:WolfyDrake95|Drake]]

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This is an interesting story and very well written. Please continue the good work. --Lloyd

Yeah, great story. Though you might want a little more paragraphing. One paragraph was in a huge lump that was a little hard to read. But other than that, excellent job! --Drake