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# Priest is surprised that Sandra cannot feel God
# Priest is surprised that Sandra cannot feel God
# Zaza knows Sandra's name
# Zaza knows Sandra's name
# 3rd time's the charm (not written yet =) )
# 3rd time's the charm (not yet explained)
[[User:Pandora|Tasci]] 03:19, 6 June 2008 (EDT)
# Light in Zaza's hands
[[User:Pandora|Tasci]] 03:57, 27 September 2008 (EDT)
 
Also I need a real title. Originally I was going to have her looking for proof of magic, but that ended up being kind of silly and stupid. The whole story is silly and stupid really. I'd use the title "Third Time's The Charm" except that sounds hokey and hackneyed. I'll probably wait until it's done,
since that's the best time to title a story.
 
[[User:Pandora|Tasci]] 05:36, 6 June 2008 (EDT)
 
I completely got the location of Philadelphia, PN mixed up. I'd been talking with a friend who lived there and it seemed like a great place to write about, even if I'll never be able to go there. For years we exchanged words and I only noticed that what I thought was Philadelphia, Pennsylvania was in fact Little Rock, Arkansas. >.< So my description of "tornado alley" doesn't really do the extremely east coast city justice, and I'm kind of dimly rethinking how to describe Lucy's adventures from there.
 
[[User:Pandora|Tasci]] 05:01, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Latest revision as of 00:01, 18 July 2009

I should probably point out where Sandra's universe has magic in it, whereas our universe has none. x_x (YET! Yet I say!)

Magic so far

  1. Priest is surprised that Sandra cannot feel God
  2. Zaza knows Sandra's name
  3. 3rd time's the charm (not yet explained)
  4. Light in Zaza's hands

Tasci 03:57, 27 September 2008 (EDT)

Also I need a real title. Originally I was going to have her looking for proof of magic, but that ended up being kind of silly and stupid. The whole story is silly and stupid really. I'd use the title "Third Time's The Charm" except that sounds hokey and hackneyed. I'll probably wait until it's done, since that's the best time to title a story.

Tasci 05:36, 6 June 2008 (EDT)

I completely got the location of Philadelphia, PN mixed up. I'd been talking with a friend who lived there and it seemed like a great place to write about, even if I'll never be able to go there. For years we exchanged words and I only noticed that what I thought was Philadelphia, Pennsylvania was in fact Little Rock, Arkansas. >.< So my description of "tornado alley" doesn't really do the extremely east coast city justice, and I'm kind of dimly rethinking how to describe Lucy's adventures from there.

Tasci 05:01, 18 July 2009 (UTC)