Green Serpent 1rst version
So a brief history lesson.Back in early 2006 I had been working
at making animated clips for 3 "mini-movies" whose scripts I had worked out in my head.One of the mini-movies got completed but the other two didn't.The notion was to treat the clips as a film-makers American Erector Mechanno Set.The clips were set at a low frame speed of 3 to 5 frames per second and each clip lasted perhaps 3 to 8 seconds.
The clips sat on the back shelf for years afterwards,till in 2013 it looked like the
TSA Bash might have some kind of film festival component to it.It didn't happen,but the American Erector Set toolbox concept got another airing.
Hoare Fang
Motif Title and Description
005 aliens and minaturized submarines in
body a pre ww1 submarine inside a body ,a helmetted diver breating air bubbles,a sphere and its escort passes in the background in front of a beating heart
010 Cellular transformation
015 corsetted woman screams
020 cylinder turning phonograph
025 Devil turns robed woman into nude man
030 dragon bursts thru roof
035 dragon flaps wings
040 dragon tf close inside windowed room
045 dragon tf closer inside windowed room
050 dragons head flickers tongue
055 experimental photos and models
060 falling man turns into dragon
065 falling trunk from tower into schooner
070 Frost Fang by avi and by cel number
075 Frost Fang the Reluctant Dragon drawing
080 going snouty in front of dragonsegg caverns
085 woman grows close inside windowed room
090 guitar gertie does the striptease drawing
095 Living Lizard
100 running woman turns into bosomy dragon
105 sea serpent hoare fang underway
110 a sea serpent sinks or its capsized
hull bobs in the waves
115 snaky human into a dragon's dragon
120 steam buckboard wagon and train
125 Views of the Settings
a) Hoarefang Tower island b)SS Hoare Fang side view c)SS Hoare Fang aerial view d)Hoarefang Tower with dragon
130 waves against submerged ships figurehead
135 western dragon breathes fire
140 whipping rope beside man in front of
dragonsegg caverns
145 woman closes then opens mouth in front
of a mirror in a room
150 woman in roomlistens to a cylinder
phonograph player in front of the Bloody August Mirror
155 various charcoal-mation cels of womans
morphing form
160 Wreck of the Sea Serpente
SS Hoare Fangs ancestor runs up on the rocks in distant shots.The mere dragon passengers and crew flee the wreck,some not successfully.The dead mere-dragons return to their true feral dragon shapes..A feral dragon appears on the wrecks conning tower and communicates to the huddled masses .A deal is made.The rocks rise and the wreck comes above the deadly waters.
0165 sinking of the sea serpente
Green Serpent episode 01
( based on Grimms Fairy Tales Little Red Riding Hood and the 17th century fairy tale The Great Green Serpent by D'Aulnoy )
Characters Little Red Riding Hood The Big Bad Wolf Giant Big Ben The Preacher Big Bad's lost love SS Hoare Fang and her folk
( assume for this script that Hoare Fang is the afterlife for a sea serpente passenger liner wrecked long long ago and far far away. Hence she sails through a unformed universe and is a world onto herself in this otherworldy chaos or endless ocean.All the other settings,the island with the tower,the church are all somehow within this ghostly liner. She and her original crew and passengers are doomed to this eternal wandering, unless like Ebeneezer Scrooge,they can save the Lost Souls,doomed loves,etc of the worlds. In the Promenade only one film plays on the rickety old projector,the final moments of Hoare Fang.The film always breaks just before cel se014 in clip m160.That film won't get to the 'Redemption" part (cels se 014 to se027 unless a good deed is done.)
Opening
video-modified m130 ( put individual cels sh000 to sh 010 into Paint and spraypaint light green sparklers moving from left to right 'will o wisps' and recompile to make a clip the length of the Opening and Credits music) music-greenserpent from the Hoare Fang music archive as a alternate Follow the Drinking Gourd from Taylors Tunebook at the Contemplators website duration-the first 43 seconds of greenserpent's 4 minute 19 second length aught to leave the impression of a 'Flying Dutchman loveboat' music lyrics (?)the cold wide stillness when i swim in this bay i am drowning all by myself for the swell in me for the green serpent i am not alright
Act 1
video-a modified m100 ( use the first cel of the building by itself for the duration of the Preachers "I pronounce you husband and wife".Then time the remaining clip of woman running out of building to BBll's line .cut out portion of clip where the running woman tf's) audio-to be supplied duration-still image and animation adjusted to the length of the characters lines
video-m100 still image cel
Preacher-and since no one has raised any objection
to why this man and woman should be lawfully wedded,i now pronounce you
video-the modified m100 of woman running out of
building
BB's lost love- ( screaming) he's a werewolf
Act 2
(scene starts with little red in front of the mirror, listening to some bouncy devil tune video/cels - M 150 repeat clip to length of audio track music -What Do You Do With A Drunken Sailor/Farmers Curst Wife/The Ghost Lover audio effect -woman laughing duration- 66.6 seconds ( 3 fps) (number of the Beast )
audio effect ( loud) Click
( laughter stop abruptly.For the tune that means stopping the tune at some inappropriate spot in mid tune )
video -M150 audio/music-silenced duration-5 seconds
video- M150 audio- Big Bad Wolf 0005
Big Bad Wolf ( cold emotionless) hey hey hey,its your
ex-partner here ,the Big Bad Wolf.While you were out shopping with Granny me and Big Ben came by and left this message.I know you wrecked my wedding.Meet me on the Promenade at 10 tonight.Be alone!
video/cel M150 dressed woman image overlain on m0125a tower island duration timed to length of the Narration track audiotrack-supplied narrator 010
Narrator:(N010)when Jack robbed the giant Big Ben the giant was
hard up for clothing.So when Big Bad Wolf,who suspected that Little Red had ruined his wedding,learned that Jack and Little Red were cousins,the plot was hatched
( take individual cels from m150 and run them through Paint to shift image fraction of a inch in random directions so that when they are put back together as a video clip the visual effect is of a room shaking whilst the phonograph is still turning )
video-the modified m150 clip audio- Giant 005 duration- as required to suggest Big Ben is banging away at the building Little Red is in
Big Ben-fee fi fo fum,i smell the blood of a
englishmun
Act 3
( since the Promenade aboard SS Hoare Fang does not have any image cels or clips as at the time this script was made,use various tricks.Perhaps cels from m130 with a background overlaid on the image, of the coast moving from left to right.Or the m105 clip speeding up or slowing down in sync with the conversation between Big Bad Wolf and Little Red)
video -modified m130 and m105 music-'whoisat' ( available as midi in Taylors Tune Book archived at the Contemplator website.record to Video Framer 1.07 's audio recorder as a wav file ) duration-long enough for Big Bad to get plastered from the whiskey bottle he's purloined from Hoare Fangs shipboard bar and grille.about 33 seconds according to Who Is At My Window Weeping's cycle.
video -clip m160 ( start at wrecked sea serpent on the rocks,end just before the dragon on the conning tower appears,roughly cels se0004 to se0013) audio-papercrumbling ( Big Bad Wolf was crumbling up the latest letter from his lost love,who was explaining why she can't marry a guy who turns into a werewolf when a silver wedding band is placed on his finger )
audio effect-heartbeat fast,heartbeat medium,heartbeat slow in background as the letter is read in the main audio track.time as required to leave impression of a cooling love via the slowing heartbeat
lost loves letter -Dear Johan....
video -clip m105 stopped midway,with the craft frozen on the screen,cel su007 used as still for length of silence audio-'dead' silence duration-9 seconds of silence
video-m160 from cels se0014 to se0027.the feral dragon on the conning tower saying 'enough already,save yourselfs" audio-paper tearing sound ( the lost love letter) duration-start audio track with paper tearing sound,then Big Bad Wolf's 'enough already' declaration
Big Bad Wolf- ( somewhat slurred ) Enough!
video-clip 130 added onto itself to make up the 25 second length of the Getback music tune.start first chunk at slow sluggish speed,increase speed ( via video framer 1.07's speed function or frame rate adjustment )till the final few seconds suggests things are moving again music-GETBACK from the Hoare Fang music archive
Act 4
video- m20 timed to length of Narrator audio audio- supplied narrator 015
Narrator-and so Big Bad Wolf confronted Little Red in the Promenade and though she lied through the teeth he learned in a roundabout way that the control for the cursed silver ring that had ruined his wedding lay in Little Red's trunk.They were both due to depart Hoare Fang in three days.Big Bad needed that trunk to go away permanently if he'd ever have a chance in the world beyond the Endless Ocean
video-the still m70 timed to narrator 020 audio-supplied narrator 020
Narrator-the ships bartender told Big Bad that there was this
black gang dragon he knew who came up occassionaly to visit him.for a small price he'd see that trunk never got out of never never land
video-m 065 using a modified cel fa0012 with the 'trunk' erased from the deck of Hoare Fangs shore ferry perhaps jiggle fa0012 in Paint to create a clip leaving impression of rocking boats,as like the giant shaking building scene audio-general crowd noise of passengers departing the ship.possibly happy chatty Little Red and more nervous and worried Big Bad Wolf.suit to taste duration-as required
video -m020
Narrator-and so the ships bartender holding a bottle of
whisky.he made as if to give it to Big Bad but stumbled and the bottle rolled across the deck to the edge.that was a $40 bottle of whisky and Big Bad noticed it seemed to be rolling close to Little Red's trunk.Big Bad went after the bottle and slipped on a banana peel.the big wolf's feet crashed apon the trunk as he hit the deck and both the bottle and the trunk went sailing over the edge
video-m015
Little Red-( loud screech/scream) My Trunk!
video-m065 cut at cel fa0005 .freeze at this point. music- 'sleepy.mid' from Taylors tunebook in background
Narrator-frost fang of the Black Gang was sitting beside the coal
loading gate,just above the passenger tender Clara Anne.so when that trunk came into view
video-m135
then take the still image from m065 ,fa0005,and paint it with a nice orange fireball.then do a cel with collapsing fireball,and no trunk
music-keep 'sleepy.mid' in the background
video-m105
Little Red-(softer than before) my trunk
video -m120
alter the cels to include a brown oval ( Big Bad Wolf) moving from right to left,and then aboard the buckboard hitching a ride from that goggle wearing driver
Closing
video-the modifed m130 from the opening with the green will o wisps.perhaps Paint closing credits into the will o wisps music-Love is Easy from Taylors Tunebook to end things on a lighter mood.sort of a lullaby tune.The Mist Covered Mountains from same source as alternative
Finis