User talk:Raven928

Once I get stories up this will be the place to give comments on them.

In the subject bar please type the name of the story. A colon (:) and then a more specific subject.

Please be kind, (no flames), but also remember that I can't get better without critiques. Just remember to have it be critiques not complaints.

Thanks,

WR

Welcome Aboard

Hi Raven. I went ahead and did some formatting cleanup on your storystart. Feel free to change anything I've altered. --Buck 22:59, 6 September 2007 (EDT)