User talk:Clicketyclack/The Rain Falls

Nice to see you post a story! -- ShadowWolf 01:28, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Powerful imagery and great flow - my only complaint is that I'm apparently too tired to follow it in a completely coherent manner. I did manage to make it all the way through and think this shows some promise! -- ShadowWolf 01:36, 29 June 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! There was some worry that it might be hard to follow what's actually happening. I posted it over on FA but didn't get any sort of critique. I will likely continue to tweak it as I feel it's lacking something and the end is not what I want it to be.

P.S. No, you didn't step on my toes. I'm completely unfamiliar with the wiki format. I was attempting to put it where it is supposed to go when I discovered you had already moved it. It was a pleasant surprise for me.