Talk:GNE

Well...

As I said in Second Life, I always say exactly what I feel about anything I read...

The writing itself--the word-flow and semantic forms--was entertaining and supported a profluence in the tale.

The transition to Lenny and the one to Aladdin were, to me, a bit jarring.

I thought that, when the Dr. appeared, some resolution of events would begin but, if that happened, I missed it.

Overall, I kept feeling that I was in a story that depended heavily on some previous story's backstory for understanding.

Once I finished, I noticed the link to Xanadu and wished I had the time to go explore it and come back to read GNE with more capability to understand.

Finally, I like GNE :-)