User talk:Kenani/The Girl of His Dreams

My first story on Shifti. Enjoy.--Kenani 19:12, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

A little formulaic, but well-written. Nicely done. —Robotech Master 19:15, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Not bad. As RM said, a bit formulaic, but well executed. Pardon me while I go add you to the Pack. -- ShadowWolf 19:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, then. It may be formulaic, but keep in mind that it's my first story. Gotta start somewhere. --Kenani 19:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)