User talk:WolfyDrake95/Finding Himself

I'm not sure how to say this, but I think I need to say something.

Now, I'm not sure of you're own age; but as an underage writer, this is extremely well written. I'm also under 21, and this story resonates with a part of my life. Specifically the six years I spent in California. I was out of phase with the rest of the world up there, and my few friends didn't stick around. So for me, the emotional content was presented very well.

A bit too well, perhaps, which leads me to believe that you are still experiencing some of what is presented here. I wish I could say that my writings aren't as based on my life as they are, but that would be a lie. A facade. I too am very good at facades. Put on the face of the day, show what people want to see, not what you feel; but that's a great way of building up emotions. And when you can no longer hold them back, they overflow. Hopefully when it happens you're alone, otherwise all they see is weakness. I showed a lot of weakness in California, and it caused me a lot of grief.

Now, I never really thought about suicide, it just seemed detrimental to the advancement of my life, but I have written about it. Specifically a short film script called Internal Conflict. That one wierded out my parents. They almost sent me to a psychologist for it. My writings can be pretty dark, and they are usually driven by dark experiences in my life. The only thing that got me through California was one good friend, and a firm belief that God had something better for me down the road.

Even now I'm somewhat of an escapist. I'll read about others problems, instead of fixing my own. Books, Video games, movies, and even music are all a way out of the real world. Even my writings are an escape from the desert of the real. For a few hours a night, I can do terrible things to someone else, but have it turn out alright.

If you're ever pissed about life in high school, just watch "Little Miss Sunshine," That always cheers me up.

Back to your story, I really do like it. I enjoy man vs self conflicts, so you might even think of making it into a short story, or small series. A continuation would not be unwelcome. You might even mod it to fit into a story universe. Pig and Whistle is needing some starting authors and characters.

--Concerned Reader 18:18, 21 June 2009 (UTC)