Talk:Nahual

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Nice little story! I hope my various suggestions and comments weren't out of line, I figured I'd give input both on minor issues of grammar or wording as well as a few bits of story logic I felt might use a little refining. If I went too far or otherwise made a mess of things feel free to revert my changes. Bryan 21:48, 27 July 2007 (EDT)

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