User talk:Raven928

Give comments on individual stories on the story discussion. Basically when you're in a story page just click on the discussion button (like you did to get here) and give your comments.

In the subject bar please put a specific subject.

Please be kind, (no flames), but also remember that I can't get better without critiques. Just remember to have it be critiques not complaints.

This page is fro comments in general. Since most of my stories aren't the best there may not be much to comment on...

Thanks,

WR

Thanks to Buck for helping me fix my stuff up a bit