User talk:Kenani/The Girl of His Dreams

My first story on Shifti. Enjoy.--Kenani 19:12, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

A little formulaic, but well-written. Nicely done. —Robotech Master 19:15, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Not bad. As RM said, a bit formulaic, but well executed. Pardon me while I go add you to the Pack. -- ShadowWolf 19:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, then. It may be formulaic, but keep in mind that it's my first story. Gotta start somewhere. --Kenani 19:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

That is why you earned a spot in the Pack down in the Promising New Authors section - as you noticed (and corrected the link - thanks) -- ShadowWolf 19:45, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Yep. You might want to go check out the Writer's School, and in particular The Tail Tale. There's some good advice for new writers in the School. —Robotech Master 20:32, 29 June 2009 (UTC)

Hey, I go to that school! Really, it is very useful. Welcome to the pack, though I'm not officially in it yet, and have a good stay on shifti. I look forward to whatever else escapes from your brain onto the page. --Concerned Reader 00:27, 30 June 2009 (UTC)