Talk:Music Talent

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I didn't comment on this when I first saw it on the TSA, but I did really like it at the time. It has a few rough spots here and there, but the flow is nice, and it is clearly a subject you know a lot about (the music that is. :) ). Not much I would suggest to change or edit, other than maybe reread a few times to double/triple check the flow of the dialog; it feels a little rough here and there where I spot checked it, but nothing horrible.

To be completely frank and honest with you, I liked this one a lot more than your second story (which I commented on via email when it was on the TSA, if you want I can bring some of those comments over here to that story too, to get them 'on record')

Good luck with the future writing, and thank you for the story. --Jetfire 10:09, 8 July 2008 (EDT)

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