User talk:Raven928

Once I get stories up this will be the place to give comments on them.

In the subject bar please type the name of the story. A colon (:) and then a more specific subject.

Please be kind, (no flames), but also remember that I can't get better without critiques. Just remember to have it be critiques not complaints.

Thanks,

WR

Welcome Aboard

Hi Raven. I went ahead and did some formatting cleanup on your storystart. Feel free to change anything I've altered. I'll also note that each story has its own Discussion page. You can create add each story you post to your Watchlist to keep track of comments. I also recommend visiting the Templates Help page for a lot of useful formatting tweaks.--Buck 22:59, 6 September 2007 (EDT)