Talk:Alex and Hannah

This story is about two-thirds to three-quarters complete. After that, of course, will come some heavy-duty editing and spell-checking on my part. My greatest weakness, is probably punctuation. Second and related is flow. My prose tends to look choppy to me. That's what I'll work on first.

I guess (hope) I'm ready to hear what other people think so far.

I'll be doing a lot of revising, but the story is essentially done.