User talk:Robotech Master/Holding Helena

Truly an excellent sequel to the first, and I really hope you're writing more soon. Oh, and I like Linkin Park too. What I've Done is a great song. :) --Drake 10:23, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

It's almost scary how well the lyrics fit the story, isn't it? I only realized it myself fairly late in the editing process, Certainly they fit better here than they did in Transformers. :)

As to writing more soon…dunno. Depends if I can find an idea, I guess. This one pretty much just wanted out, but I don't really know where things are going to go from there. (Though once other series have "caught up" to that point in continuity, it occurs to me a furre resort might be a great place to have characters from different series meet for crossovers…) —Robotech Master 10:46, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

The lyrics of What I've Done fits this story pretty well, but a difference I'd like to point out is that while What I've Done has a more angry, determined tone to it, this story in contrast has a more passive tone. Just pointing it out :).

And actually, I can think of a couple of possible ideas for future stories. Say, something screws up at work, something happens to one of the Eleven, etc. You could even write in, say, a betrayal of sorts on Melton's part, though that wouldn't be advisable as you'd ruin the whole emotional bond that you've established with the reader. That's what I like about this story: Helena Melton is described in a way that makes the reader sympathize and understand, thus creating an emotional bond between reader and character.

Oh, and the idea of a crossover would be pretty great. Still hope that you've got more up your sleeve! --Drake 15:45, 7 July 2009 (UTC)