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New page: A really nice story. I like it, though you seem to mix up the pronouns for the old mage in his doe-form. He and she alternate quite often. But that's just a little taint. Thumb up!
 
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A really nice story. I like it, though you seem to mix up the pronouns for the old mage in his doe-form. He and she alternate quite often.
A really nice story. I like it, though you seem to mix up the pronouns for the old mage in his doe-form. He and she alternate quite often.
But that's just a little taint. Thumb up!
But that's just a little taint. Thumb up!
Best greetings, Twilight

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A really nice story. I like it, though you seem to mix up the pronouns for the old mage in his doe-form. He and she alternate quite often. But that's just a little taint. Thumb up! Best greetings, Twilight