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::Yep. You might want to go check out the [[Writer's School]], and in particular [[The Tail Tale]]. There's some good advice for new writers in the School. —[[User:Robotech Master|Robotech Master]] 20:32, 29 June 2009 (UTC) | ::Yep. You might want to go check out the [[Writer's School]], and in particular [[The Tail Tale]]. There's some good advice for new writers in the School. —[[User:Robotech Master|Robotech Master]] 20:32, 29 June 2009 (UTC) | ||
::<span style="color: #006400;">Hey, I go to that school! Really, it is very useful. Welcome to the pack, though I'm not officially in it yet, and have a good stay on shifti. I look forward to whatever else escapes from your brain onto the page.</span> --[[User:Concerned Reader|Concerned Reader]] 00:27, 30 June 2009 (UTC) | |||
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My first story on Shifti. Enjoy.--Kenani 19:12, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
- A little formulaic, but well-written. Nicely done. —Robotech Master 19:15, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
- Not bad. As RM said, a bit formulaic, but well executed. Pardon me while I go add you to the Pack. -- ShadowWolf 19:22, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, then. It may be formulaic, but keep in mind that it's my first story. Gotta start somewhere. --Kenani 19:28, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
- That is why you earned a spot in the Pack down in the Promising New Authors section - as you noticed (and corrected the link - thanks) -- ShadowWolf 19:45, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
- Yep. You might want to go check out the Writer's School, and in particular The Tail Tale. There's some good advice for new writers in the School. —Robotech Master 20:32, 29 June 2009 (UTC)
- Hey, I go to that school! Really, it is very useful. Welcome to the pack, though I'm not officially in it yet, and have a good stay on shifti. I look forward to whatever else escapes from your brain onto the page. --Concerned Reader 00:27, 30 June 2009 (UTC)