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Revision as of 11:43, 18 September 2008 view source 84.190.123.231 (talk) New page: A really nice story. I like it, though you seem to mix up the pronouns for the old mage in his doe-form. He and she alternate quite often. But that's just a little taint. Thumb up!		Latest revision as of 13:45, 18 September 2008 view source 84.190.123.231 (talk) Removing all content from page
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	~~A really nice story. I like it, though you seem to mix up the pronouns for the old mage in his doe-form. He and she alternate quite often.~~
	~~But that's just a little taint. Thumb up!~~

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