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Just wanted to say that I'm very impressed with these two stories. Usually the first-time Chakat stories I read are fairly samish. In particular, there are a few sets of phrases which have just been used over and over (pretty much Chakat clichés), so I'm glad to see you moved away from them. Please do keep up the good work (and fast writing ;)) --Shadowsand 23:01, 31 July 2009 (BST) | Just wanted to say that I'm very impressed with these two stories. Usually the first-time Chakat stories I read are fairly samish. In particular, there are a few sets of phrases which have just been used over and over (pretty much Chakat clichés), so I'm glad to see you moved away from them. Please do keep up the good work (and fast writing ;)) --Shadowsand 23:01, 31 July 2009 (BST) | ||
:Now you've got me curious. What are these infamous first-time-chakat cliches exactly? Something tells me they would be great fun to parody mercilessly.--[[User:Robotech Master|Robotech Master]] 00:59, 1 August 2009 (UTC) | :Now you've got me curious. What are these infamous first-time-chakat cliches exactly? Something tells me they would be great fun to parody mercilessly.--[[User:Robotech Master|Robotech Master]] 00:59, 1 August 2009 (UTC) | ||
::Well, stuff like when you were explaining about the pronouns, you didn't use the typical explination of hir (most people use 'herr'). There were just lots of little things as I was reading through where I thought "Oh god, here we go again", but then you didn't, which was good :) --Shadowsand 22:40, 3 August 2009 (BST) | |||
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Just wanted to say that I'm very impressed with these two stories. Usually the first-time Chakat stories I read are fairly samish. In particular, there are a few sets of phrases which have just been used over and over (pretty much Chakat clichés), so I'm glad to see you moved away from them. Please do keep up the good work (and fast writing ;)) --Shadowsand 23:01, 31 July 2009 (BST)
- Now you've got me curious. What are these infamous first-time-chakat cliches exactly? Something tells me they would be great fun to parody mercilessly.--Robotech Master 00:59, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Well, stuff like when you were explaining about the pronouns, you didn't use the typical explination of hir (most people use 'herr'). There were just lots of little things as I was reading through where I thought "Oh god, here we go again", but then you didn't, which was good :) --Shadowsand 22:40, 3 August 2009 (BST)