User talk:WolfyDrake95/New World

Hey there. If any moderators read this, please help. I dunno how to get boldfaced words into two seperate lines, one right beneath the other. This is for the timestamp in my story: I normally put time, followed by activity or place.

Thanks if you read this! --WolfyDrake

You could insert the XHTML standard <br/> — a lot of the standard HTML markup is there and functional. For simpler things like the line-break there is no problem… When it comes to the more complex markup you should use the WikiMarkup bits to make sure that the page is rendered correctly. -- ShadowWolf 15:20, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

There is a small date error in the story, the furry "virus" starts in 1987, not 1974. Otherwise not a bad entry into the universe. Good work! --Eirik 23:16, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks you guys; I've cleaned up all the errors. Still can't believe just a day after posting, a whole bunch of veteran writers pop by to read...and my story isn't exactly short. Your feedback means a lot to me: thanks, Eirik! --WolfyDrake 21:31, 15 May 2009 (+0800 GMT)

You have some "flow" problems - ie: there are some spots where the story feels very stilted - but beyond that there is nothing actually wrong here. I've got to go edit my "favorites" list to add a link to this story now. Great job! (And while I'm no good at providing effective advice about how to clean up problems, I will try if I have an idea of how to do it) -- ShadowWolf 21:08, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the critique! I'll make sure I do something about that. I come along and add in a little bit here and there every now and then (see how vague I am?). I kinda did the story part by part, so maybe it's a little wierd...mind pointing out the parts that aren't too good (which segment of the story)? Oh, and a HUGE thanks for the fave! I gotta start on my next story now...veeery slowly. Criticisms still welcome, and I'll make updates for this story. :)-- Drake 21:40, 19 May 2009 (+0800 GMT)