The Fool in the Fox: Revision history

19 August 2009

• curprev 14:2414:24, 19 August 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 16,176 bytes −2 Retcon!

29 July 2009

• curprev 06:5406:54, 29 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 16,178 bytes +85 clearly I didn't do that right the first time
• curprev 06:5306:53, 29 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 16,093 bytes −79 recategorized under F instead of T

27 July 2009

• curprev 07:1607:16, 27 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 16,172 bytes +29 replaced "Yes, that's right. Tail." For some reason people really like that line *shrug*

26 July 2009

• curprev 15:4515:45, 26 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 16,143 bytes +877 revised slightly to fall in line with Jonas's personality/bio-ish. I think I'm definitely done this time. Yay

7 July 2009

• curprev 17:1617:16, 7 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 15,266 bytes −281 slight rewording to better conform with Jonas's personality
• curprev 09:2909:29, 7 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 15,547 bytes +131 undid copy/paste error. CR edits back in

4 July 2009

• curprev 14:4014:40, 4 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 15,416 bytes +436 Second wave of edits complete, going to take a little longer to review the bathroom/bar section. Dialogue suggestions appreciated.
• curprev 14:1314:13, 4 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 14,980 bytes −36 reworded a sentence to make more sense
• curprev 14:1114:11, 4 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 15,016 bytes +7 italic maitenance. Need to learn to use Preview
• curprev 14:0714:07, 4 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 15,009 bytes +3 Replaced italics, thank you ShadowWolf for pointing it out
• curprev 11:5011:50, 4 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 15,006 bytes −382 First round of edits, hesitant to do more until I'm sure I'm going in the right direction

2 July 2009

• curprev 11:5711:57, 2 July 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 15,388 bytes +180 Removed WIP tag, minor edit in accordance with CR's feedback

30 June 2009

• curprev 10:1910:19, 30 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 15,208 bytes −1 spacing correction
• curprev 10:1810:18, 30 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 15,209 bytes +1,391 Done, but leaving WIP tag up until fine tuning is done.

28 June 2009

• curprev 10:5810:58, 28 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 13,818 bytes −5 No edit summary
• curprev 10:5710:57, 28 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 13,823 bytes +7 typos for the win!
• curprev 10:5110:51, 28 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 13,816 bytes +1,035 Teeny bit more.

27 June 2009

• curprev 16:1516:15, 27 June 2009 Concerned Reader talk contribs m 12,781 bytes −635 deleted duplicated text, keeping the bolded version.
• curprev 16:1016:10, 27 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 13,416 bytes +2,141 I'm working on it! I swear!
• curprev 13:4413:44, 27 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 11,275 bytes +825 I'm getting there...

13 June 2009

• curprev 10:1610:16, 13 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 10,450 bytes +4 revised in order to conform with the character bio

11 June 2009

• curprev 15:2915:29, 11 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs m 10,446 bytes −4 fixed a typo
• curprev 15:2515:25, 11 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 10,450 bytes +2,559 added an extra bit

9 June 2009

• curprev 16:5416:54, 9 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 7,891 bytes +1,708 added a small bit

8 June 2009

• curprev 18:5618:56, 8 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 6,183 bytes +2,372 added an extra bit

4 June 2009

• curprev 19:1019:10, 4 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 3,811 bytes 0 No edit summary
• curprev 19:1019:10, 4 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 3,811 bytes +7 added work in title tag
• curprev 19:0419:04, 4 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 3,804 bytes 0 No edit summary
• curprev 19:0319:03, 4 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 3,804 bytes +5 No edit summary
• curprev 19:0319:03, 4 June 2009 Lloyd Brunnel talk contribs 3,799 bytes +3,799 Created page with '{{Universe|Pig and Whistle}}{{byline|user=Lloyd Brunnel|author=Lloyd}}I poked my nose out of the mass of blankets that made up my makeshift den and took a cautious sniff. While t...'