User talk:Robotech Master/Holding Helena - Revision history

WolfyDrake95 at 15:45, 7 July 2009

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	:As to writing more soon…dunno. Depends if I can find an idea, I guess. This one pretty much just wanted out, but I don't really know where things are going to go from there. (Though once other series have "caught up" to that point in continuity, it occurs to me a furre resort might be a great place to have characters from different series meet for crossovers…) —[[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech Master]] 10:46, 5 July 2009 (UTC)		:As to writing more soon…dunno. Depends if I can find an idea, I guess. This one pretty much just wanted out, but I don't really know where things are going to go from there. (Though once other series have "caught up" to that point in continuity, it occurs to me a furre resort might be a great place to have characters from different series meet for crossovers…) —[[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech Master]] 10:46, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

			::The lyrics of ''What I've Done'' fits this story pretty well, but a difference I'd like to point out is that while ''What I've Done'' has a more angry, determined tone to it, this story in contrast has a more passive tone. Just pointing it out :).

			::And actually, I can think of a couple of possible ideas for future stories. Say, something screws up at work, something happens to one of the Eleven, etc. You could even write in, say, a betrayal of sorts on Melton's part, though that wouldn't be advisable as you'd ruin the whole emotional bond that you've established with the reader. That's what I like about this story: Helena Melton is described in a way that makes the reader sympathize and understand, thus creating an emotional bond between reader and character.

			:Oh, and the idea of a crossover would be pretty great. Still hope that you've got more up your sleeve! --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 15:45, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

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	Truly an excellent sequel to the first, and I really hope you're writing more soon. Oh, and I like Linkin Park too. ''What I've Done'' is a great song. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 10:23, 5 July 2009 (UTC)		Truly an excellent sequel to the first, and I really hope you're writing more soon. Oh, and I like Linkin Park too. ''What I've Done'' is a great song. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Drake]] 10:23, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

			:It's almost scary how well the lyrics fit the story, isn't it? I only realized it myself fairly late in the editing process, Certainly they fit better here than they did in ''Transformers''. :)

			:As to writing more soon…dunno. Depends if I can find an idea, I guess. This one pretty much just wanted out, but I don't really know where things are going to go from there. (Though once other series have "caught up" to that point in continuity, it occurs to me a furre resort might be a great place to have characters from different series meet for crossovers…) —[[User:Robotech Master\|Robotech Master]] 10:46, 5 July 2009 (UTC)

WolfyDrake95: A very nice story.

2009-07-05T10:23:46Z

A very nice story.

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Truly an excellent sequel to the first, and I really hope you're writing more soon. Oh, and I like Linkin Park too. ''What I've Done'' is a great song. :) --[[User:WolfyDrake95|Drake]] 10:23, 5 July 2009 (UTC)