User talk:Concerned Reader/Lotka Volterra - Revision history

Rusty Patriot at 09:39, 4 August 2022

2022-08-04T09:39:38Z

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	:{{Silver\|Sweet, go for it! Also, I am sensing potential for sequels! By the way, I've completely forgetten how to use wikicode around here. Sorry about that. I'll try picking it up as I go.}} —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 14:47, 10 June 2011 (UTC)		:{{Silver\|Sweet, go for it! Also, I am sensing potential for sequels! By the way, I've completely forgetten how to use wikicode around here. Sorry about that. I'll try picking it up as I go.}} —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 14:47, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

	~~hello~~

Rusty Patriot at 13:30, 24 June 2022

2022-06-24T13:30:44Z

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	:{{Silver\|Sweet, go for it! Also, I am sensing potential for sequels! By the way, I've completely forgetten how to use wikicode around here. Sorry about that. I'll try picking it up as I go.}} —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 14:47, 10 June 2011 (UTC)		:{{Silver\|Sweet, go for it! Also, I am sensing potential for sequels! By the way, I've completely forgetten how to use wikicode around here. Sorry about that. I'll try picking it up as I go.}} —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 14:47, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

			hello

WolfyDrake95 at 14:47, 10 June 2011

2011-06-10T14:47:08Z

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	{{Green\|Hey, thanks! Yeah, there's still a lot of character development that needs to be dispersed throughout it. I'll see what I can get done over the summer.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 05:31, 10 June 2011 (UTC)		{{Green\|Hey, thanks! Yeah, there's still a lot of character development that needs to be dispersed throughout it. I'll see what I can get done over the summer.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 05:31, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

			:{{Silver\|Sweet, go for it! Also, I am sensing potential for sequels! By the way, I've completely forgetten how to use wikicode around here. Sorry about that. I'll try picking it up as I go.}} —[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 14:47, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

Concerned Reader: Yo dawg, you gots to re-silver for ever new line.

2011-06-10T05:31:03Z

Yo dawg, you gots to re-silver for ever new line.

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	{{Silver\|Hullooo, CR, I just thought I'd leave a message here since it looked awfully empty. Come on, other guys, come critique this or something!		{{Silver\|Hullooo, CR, I just thought I'd leave a message here since it looked awfully empty. Come on, other guys, come critique this or something!}}

	Well, actually I've already told you what I think of the piece. It's a really neat piece, and I thought it was pretty original for the PaW universe. It's well-written and I liked the way it ran. Characters and their voices are distinctive and interesting to read. Still, I think you could elaborate a little more on the emotions Lotka feels when he encounters and glues himself to Jon; also, you could totally expand more on their relationship. There's a lot of potential for depth there! Okay, see you around. Cheers! :) }}—[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 04:43, 10 June 2011 (UTC)		{{Silver\|Well, actually I've already told you what I think of the piece. It's a really neat piece, and I thought it was pretty original for the PaW universe. It's well-written and I liked the way it ran. Characters and their voices are distinctive and interesting to read. Still, I think you could elaborate a little more on the emotions Lotka feels when he encounters and glues himself to Jon; also, you could totally expand more on their relationship. There's a lot of potential for depth there! Okay, see you around. Cheers! :) }}—[[User:WolfyDrake95\|Wolfy]] 04:43, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

			{{Green\|Hey, thanks! Yeah, there's still a lot of character development that needs to be dispersed throughout it. I'll see what I can get done over the summer.}} --[[User:Concerned Reader\|Concerned Reader]] 05:31, 10 June 2011 (UTC)

WolfyDrake95: I AM ALIVE

2011-06-10T04:43:09Z

I AM ALIVE

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{{Silver|Hullooo, CR, I just thought I'd leave a message here since it looked awfully empty. Come on, other guys, come critique this or something!

Well, actually I've already told you what I think of the piece. It's a really neat piece, and I thought it was pretty original for the PaW universe. It's well-written and I liked the way it ran. Characters and their voices are distinctive and interesting to read. Still, I think you could elaborate a little more on the emotions Lotka feels when he encounters and glues himself to Jon; also, you could totally expand more on their relationship. There's a lot of potential for depth there! Okay, see you around. Cheers! :) }}—[[User:WolfyDrake95|Wolfy]] 04:43, 10 June 2011 (UTC)